George J. Dance wrote:
Wilk Dockery wrote:

General-Zod wrote:
Will Dockery wrote:

Sunglass

This battered old shell looks like a death mask.

Lucky or not I shall wear it as I walk into Phenix City. Though I
cheated in my gambling I wound up broke anyway.

And I come, and I pay the zombie w*ores and walking dead. While the
dark lady in sunglasses takes the halo from his clay head.

One more trip over that bridge to the kissing booth. Where there's
smoke there may be fire and this time I got burned.

I walk this beach at midnight like a zen dharma beach bum. And I am
saved, and I turn.

I watch the drunken poets, and my lawyer. While the dark lady in
sunglasses takes the halo from his clay head.

-Will Dockery



It is working and the poem is another classic....

Hello there my friend, hope you're doing well and your family as well.

Have a safe trip home.

Zod, we miss you on aapc (and in the Dancehall).

Will, Im glad you bumped this; it's always worth a read. I suppose the quickest way to say what I think of it is to note that I included it in
your Selected Poem; and to add that, while it can certainly be read on
its own, I think it reads works best as an integral part of the extended series that makes up Part II of that book.

https://pennyspoetry.fandom.com/wiki/Selected_Poems_by_Will_Dockery

Thanks again my friend.

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