Will Dockery wrote:
"Bill Evans" wrote in message
news:news.Thu.20151231.022821.PST.1374@mariposabill.com...
"Will Dockery" <will_dockery@outlook.com> posted the final
version of "The Ride (Combat Zone).
Will, I'm not sufficiently educated or experienced in giving
a useful critique of this poem; I'll bet Mike would do a
good job of that.
But it would help me if you could explain a couple of
things. Asking them will make me look like a silly fool,
but I'm down with that.
I look at "Rastas" and think, huh? Does this refer to
Rastafarians, those mild-mannered pot-smoking laid-back
folks from Jamaica? Can that be right? What am I missing?
And what is meant by "black" in "black pigs of poetry"?
I wonder whatever happened to Bill Evans?
I dunno
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