• Re: My Father's House / George J. Dance

    From General-Zod@3:633/280.2 to All on Tue Apr 23 07:40:11 2024
    George J. Dance wrote:

    My Father's House

    This is my father's house, although
    The man died thirteen years ago.
    They said it would be quite all right
    To take a drive to see it now.

    Dad laid those grey foundation blocks
    And built the whole thing (from a box),
    Toiling after each full day's work.
    I helped, though I was only six.

    Look, here's the back door I would use
    And here's where I'd remove my shoes
    To enter; there I'd leave my things
    And, when allowed, climb up these stairs.

    In this room I'd wash many a dish,
    Gaze out this window, and I'd wish
    To be so many other places.
    (Wishy-washy? Oh, I guess!)

    Outside, the garden that he grew
    Where I would work the summers through,
    While watching my friends run and play
    Mysterious games I never knew.

    That room's all changed; oh, where is it,
    The one chair I was let to sit?
    (For boys can be such filthy things.)
    Which, the corner where boys were put?

    Oh ... down that hall there is a room
    Where I'd be shut (as in a tomb)
    After the meal, to make no noise,
    To read or play alone, and then

    Lights out: in bed by nine each night,
    Some nights wanting to pee with fright,
    Face and pyjama bottoms down
    As for my father's belt I'd wait.

    Oh, if I were a millionaire
    I'd buy my father's house, and there
    I'd build a bonfire, oh so high
    Its flames would light up all the air.

    ~~
    George J. Dance
    from Logos and other logoi, 2021


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  • From W.Dockery@3:633/280.2 to All on Tue Apr 23 20:29:34 2024
    George J. Dance wrote:


    George J. Dance wrote:

    My Father's House

    This is my father's house, although
    The man died thirteen years ago.
    They said it would be quite all right
    To take a drive to see it now.

    Dad laid those grey foundation blocks
    And built the whole thing (from a box),
    Toiling after each full day's work.
    I helped, though I was only six.

    Look, here's the back door I would use
    And here's where I'd remove my shoes
    To enter; there I'd leave my things
    And, when allowed, climb up these stairs.

    In this room I'd wash many a dish,
    Gaze out this window, and I'd wish
    To be so many other places.
    (Wishy-washy? Oh, I guess!)

    Outside, the garden that he grew
    Where I would work the summers through,
    While watching my friends run and play
    Mysterious games I never knew.

    That room's all changed; oh, where is it,
    The one chair I was let to sit?
    (For boys can be such filthy things.)
    Which, the corner where boys were put?

    Oh ... down that hall there is a room
    Where I'd be shut (as in a tomb)
    After the meal, to make no noise,
    To read or play alone, and then

    Lights out: in bed by nine each night,
    Some nights wanting to pee with fright,
    Face and pyjama bottoms down
    As for my father's belt I'd wait.

    Oh, if I were a millionaire
    I'd buy my father's house, and there
    I'd build a bonfire, oh so high
    Its flames would light up all the air.

    ~~
    George J. Dance
    from Logos and other logoi, 2021

    General-Zod wrote:



    PING G.D... this posted on JLA...????


    Yes, it did. I'm replying to the copy on JKA right now.


    This is a response to the post seen at: http://www.jlaforums.com/viewtopic.php?p=660786594#660786594


    Well that's a good start.

    We may have to change our approach to posting as the new era of Usenet develops.

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